Amy Mackey(Bio)

|BASICS|

Name:Amy Mackey
Aliases:The Mind Reader, Lutenitent Mackey

Age:21
Birthplace:
Current Residence: Traveling
Occupation:Paranormal Investigator, Cop(former)
Species:Bionic Human

Weapons:Gun,Martial Arts

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Birthday:July 13th
Blood type:AB-
Hobbies:Reading Minds
Quirks:Can read minds at close range
Family:Emmanuel Blanc(Grandfather),Vera (Mother),Brandon Macky(Father)

|APPEARANCE|

Hair: Long Blonde Hair pulled back
Eyes:Deep Blue Eyes
Height: Average
Clothes: Tops with Short Skirt with a pendent necklace
Body Type:Skinny and Lady like
Image: (Optional)

|CHARACTERISTICS|

Personality:Amy is a bit boy crazy even when on the job, she also has a love of shopping and fashion. Amy has a way of knowing just the right time to strike rather physically or mentally. Amy can't stand losing especially to a rival or something evil or someone with a tyrant personality. She has a special bond with her grandfather which helps her gain connections in the community vital to her missions, she's vowed to never let a pure heartless criminal or paranormal person go unpunished.

Personal Strengths:Can learn skills faster then nearly anyone,Can read minds,Very Wealthy,Skilled in Paranormal Investigation, good with guns
Personal Weaknesses:Quite boy crazy
Personal Hero:Sherlock Holmes
Dreams and Ambitions:To solve cases that were never closed along with being a great paranormal investigator.

Likes:Asian Noodles, Paranormal, Cloths, Shopping

Dislikes:Being underestimated,Not very strong physically.

Brief History: The daughter of the greatest paranormal detective team. She under went surgery in secret to read minds and have her mother's skill when she was still a cop trying to solve a cold murder case. Traveling many places with her parents as they stopped paranormal crime. Amy often found herself getting in the middle of the investigation herself one way or the other. She soon thrived with martial arts and fire arms, she also had her mother's brilliant mind. When she could not go with them she would stay with her grandfather in their Venice Mansion. Her grandfather loved and spoiled Amy in any way he could he buying her a mersadez for her 16th birthday. This never ruined her kind and sweet character though only during extreme messeures does she even appear to pose a threat but those who take her as a helpless sweet young lady find they are dead wrong if they are enemies or demons.

This is too similar to the Vera Blanc game. Please change her so that it isn't because of copyrights. The game is copyrighted, so the character is copyrighted. I can NOT allow or approve copied work. Add more originality to her.

change it so you are not in violation of copy rights. if you don't it will be deleted.

Carmen,

Just changing her name and who her parents are doesn't make it a different character. Personality is still way to similar and the background is too short. Brief histories should be atleast one to two paragraphs long. Especially if someone is 21 years old.

even my 9 year old has a 1-2 paragraph history.

You have until the 14th of June to make the changes already specified. If changes are not made, your character will be denied.

Updated

Explain the psychic link with the grandfather?

There is no psychic link between them, her grandfather just has the name and resources to help her.

unfortunately i have hit a major issue. you are trying to bring in FICTITIOUS copyright material. if you are trying to use a non-historical character you really should do unique. in lue of that build a character that the character is based off of. your character can be the inspiration for vera blanc but what is going on here is you made the daughter of 2 fictitious copyrighted characters. that breaks our rules. besides this is still seeming to be vera with a name change and parental figure change. im sorry but this character cannot be on the site.

Unlike in Vera Blanc, Amy asked for the surgery that gave her the powers from her mind. Also both parents were never a cops and unlike her parents she has a much different approach when handling things I made sure to de-link her as much as possible she does not even have the exact powers her mom did.

its not about the powers. its about the copyright issues. you are using people who never existed in real life. they exist in a video game. not history. she doesn't provide inspiration for vera blanc. therefore this character cant be used. it is infringing on copyright.